Thursday 6 August 2020

my poetic world

                                                                                HAPPINESS     

It's hidden deep inside
It's inside that anxious last minute wait
 to meet once charming friend after so long.


                       It's inside that pumped up joy of seeing back each other
                       and smilingly running wild to hug the cherished bond             
                       that's still so strong.


  It's inside those old talks that she knows of you
  so well and the felicity it gives when the wave of
   similar thoughts underneath your oceanic mind too flows.


                             It's inside that little pause when she exactly knows a                
                            naughty thought building under your nose and with a 
                             twinkle your eyes meet that's when in symphony the                                                            funny bubble glows.


Happiness is ethereal and at the same time ineffable,
   it's preserved deep inside us
      we get to reach, find and feel only
        in company like the two seeds of different 
          essence nurtured together and while growing up 
            they entwine infuse themselves into each other's life.


     


        



TINY TALE 

Happy hello😊 to all you amazing people who are reading this right now. the tiny tale behind this poem titled “happiness” lies in its simplicity and came to life while two of the best friends were meeting after a long period of time

It was last year’s spring when my friend ‘J’ came all the way down from hills of himalayas to capital just to meet her best friend ‘Loi’ who was representing her coastal state in a cultural food festival hosted in the complex of a historic monumental site in the heart of the city. The gentle breeze blowing across the festival site was a blessing in itself as the weather mostly show its extreme in this part of the country .     

Because of so many people out there enjoying the festival ohhh… rather food i must say, we were not able to spot ‘loi’ and that’s when in between those moments i quietly witnessed a rush of emotions , excitement and eagerness on j’s face, to meet her favourite person after so long.





This little poem is all about friendship, love and the bond people share with their closed ones, with whom they don’t have to pretend, with whom they can be themselves, with whom the only thing that matters is their presence.

After all we as human beings “BREATHE HAPPINESS” only in fleeting moments such as these.



  i believe each one of us has at least, that one source from where we draw all the positivity and happiness in life. i am more than happy and excited to know your side of tiny tale.

Do let me know through your comments how happy you are after reading my first blog. Your bright ideas and valuable suggestions are happily welcomed. Come again for a new poem and a tiny tale behind that.


 


happy living till then
see you soon...

49 comments:

  1. Oh my god!! I am flabbergasted!!

    ReplyDelete
    Replies
    1. Jokes apart, this is a great blog. Beautifully expressed.

      Delete
    2. thank you so much for appreciation .

      Delete
  2. I like your selection of words....... every single word used in poem was sooo appropriate.

    ReplyDelete
  3. Beautifully expressed bhaiya ❤️

    ReplyDelete
  4. @3424 didn't read even a single line but I know you would have done some good work. Will always support whatever you do buddy ❤️.

    ReplyDelete
  5. This is really great. �� keep expressing more.

    ReplyDelete
  6. Well I m always in love with the way u mould feelings into words, that is surreal and i feel happy to be a part of this poemπŸ˜€
    Keep going and keep experimenting.❤️

    ReplyDelete
    Replies
    1. thanku so much..
      keep supporting πŸ˜„πŸ€—

      Delete
  7. Very nice brother.. Keep ut up..

    ReplyDelete
  8. Very nice brother.. Keep it up..

    ReplyDelete
  9. Great writing.Keep at it broπŸ‘

    ReplyDelete
  10. Good work bhaiya...
    Best lines "Happiness is ethereal n at the same time ineffable".

    ReplyDelete
  11. devendra shekhawat7 August 2020 at 20:08

    brother superb poetry

    ReplyDelete
  12. Great writing..Keep it up πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘

    ReplyDelete
  13. Superbbb ..😍 my long distance bestieeeπŸ€—

    ReplyDelete
  14. Nice selection of words as well as the feeling πŸ‘ŒπŸ‘Œ

    ReplyDelete
  15. Very sweet just touched

    ReplyDelete
  16. Love the way you captured their happiness without having to be a part of it ❤️❤️❤️��✊

    ReplyDelete
  17. It's is the way to find yourself in others happines������keep writing

    ReplyDelete
  18. You tuned it the best ....keep doing .good luck ��

    ReplyDelete
  19. It makes me miss my best friend too :)

    ReplyDelete
  20. beautifully expressed ..serene and simple

    ReplyDelete
  21. This is so soulful. Keep writing;)

    ReplyDelete
  22. Beautifully expressed... loved itπŸ™ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘Œ

    ReplyDelete
  23. Beautiful thoughts, well knit!!!

    ReplyDelete
  24. This is just awesomeπŸ˜„πŸŒΌ

    ReplyDelete
  25. The poetic Parmar !! great bhai

    ReplyDelete

suggestions are welcomed

my poetic world

                                                                                 HAPPINESS      It's hidden deep inside It's inside...